23rd Sep 2007
Poster 02 - Comps and Copy
Comps
I need to correct the secondary copy location, as it overlaps the graphical type in an uncomfortable way, but these illustrate the direction the poster is taking.
Copy
Och, the Sweedish word for and is not necessary for the graphica copy, and I began to play with its removal (comps 3, 4, & 5). I also might change word for bedroom (sängkammaren) to sovrum to help with the readability of the text, yet by doing so, I reduce the graphical copy by one line. I am afraid it will alter the visual path, however, I shall test this with further comps.
Comps
I need to correct the secondary copy location, as it overlaps the graphical type in an uncomfortable way, but these illustrate the direction the poster is taking.
Copy
Och, the Sweedish word for and is not necessary for the graphica copy, and I began to play with its removal (comps 3, 4, & 5). I also might change word for bedroom (sängkammaren) to sovrum to help with the readability of the text, yet by doing so, I reduce the graphical copy by one line. I am afraid it will alter the visual path, however, I shall test this with further comps.
Keywords — comps, copy, sweedish, bedroom, sovrum, sängkammaren, poster, ourtype
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